The creative writings of my peers

These posts were all, great and appealing to the reader. Whether it be me or someone else, they were all written by some talented writers. I really found the way that Glenda personified the gum in her story. Making it more of a funny comedy than a spooky or sad story, I’m really looking forward to applying that to my own writing later on down the road. Tanners post about the nutcracker and how it was a “cursed object” as it may be called was very interesting. Giving off a spooky, creepy vibe that I really enjoyed and didn’t know how to quite describe it. Laura’s tragedy type writing brought up allot of memories of the smokers in my family and how devastating smoking can be on one’s health. Glenda’s post was a nice ending post due to the hilarity to follow a creepy story and a tragedy.

 

Hi Laura. This piece was amazing! Absolutely marvelous! it brought me back to seeing my uncle and grandfather smoking, and me trying to get them to stop. i would agree with tanner by saying the ending was my favorite because it was done tastefully and with mystery. This was a great piece, thank you for sharing.

Aye, Glenda, This was seriously one of the funniest stories i have ever read. The way you humanized the gum and told their stories was actually really interesting. The way you gave them a job as to apposed to them just being chewed for pleasure was very creative and i enjoyed it. i really look forward to what you'll come up with next.

Hello Tanner, you had a very great story. it was very detailed and kept me very interested throughout the entire story.